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The Triarchy Method of Story


The Triarchy Method will help you craft your best book by focusing on what matters most: The “bones” of story. This content-focused course will help you brainstorm better and more relevant material, evaluate what ideas most belong in your story (preventing you from writing hundreds of pages that need to be scrapped), and craft a page-turning plot with compelling characters that sticks with readers long after they’ve closed the book (. . . and hopefully leads them to preorder your next book).

If you have found yourself writing and rewriting the same scenes, acts, or arcs, but have only made them marginally better; or if you have struggled with creating complex characters engaged in meaningful plots; or if you have experienced writer’s block over what happens next and how, The Triarchy Method will illuminate your way to a stronger, solid story.

But only under one condition: You must do the work.

Many aspiring authors are taught about writing “backward”—learning writing rules (like “show, don’t tell,” or “only use ‘said,'”) and how to write in a beautiful, pleasing style, first. But these are the cosmetics of storytelling (very important cosmetics, but cosmetics nonetheless), and no matter how riveting your lines appear on paper, they won’t tell a good story if the story itself is “broken.” If the story’s bones are broken.

Whether you are in the brainstorming stage, writing stage, or revising stage, and whether you prefer to pants or plan your first draft, strong bones lead to strong stories. So, what are the bones? I call them “The Triarchy of Story,” and they are as follows:



Character

Character is represented by the rib cage—it houses the heart of story. It’s how the audience gains emotional experience from the narrative, through (to some degree) empathy.




Plot

Plot is represented by the backbone—it holds the story upright and together. It’s the curvature that makes up the narrative arc, the spine that runs from beginning to end.





Theme

Theme is represented by the skull—it hosts the intellect of story. It’s how the audience gleans meaning that sticks with them long after the narrative is over. It’s why the story matters.

While some stories and genres may (rightfully) emphasize one bone over the others, it’s the progression of these elements that turns ideas into stories. You may have many interesting, and even phenomenal, concepts, but until those bones are solid, they won’t make a story solid. Everything else is an appendage.

Nearly every scene, every chapter in your story should be progressing one of these three things. If it’s not, it’s likely filler (even if cleverly disguised filler). Ideally, the majority of scenes in most stories will actually be progressing all three simultaneously. Don’t worry—I will be digging deep into each element to help you unbury your own story’s bones and accomplish this.

We will be focusing on core principles of each.

For characters, we will talk about your protagonist’s internal wants and backstory, the four basic types of arcs, how to build a balanced cast and make characters complex. We will also talk about agency, archetypes, relationships, and more.
 
For plot, we will cover the importance of goals, how to pick the right antagonistic forces, how to make conflicts meaningful, and why stakes are critical to keep the pages turning. We will also cover how to create a sense of progress and setbacks, escalate costs, craft turning points, write reveals and twists, and more.
 
For theme, we will discuss its often misunderstood components, and how to show them effectively through the story. We will also discuss how to replicate the human experience so that your reader comes away wiser, better, and more intelligent—with the story sticking to them long after The End.


In this course, we will be digging in a spiral—character, plot, theme, character, plot, theme . . . because each element grows from and influences the others. For this reason, you will be asked to be somewhat flexible with your story; you will be molding and reshaping the pieces to develop its strongest skeleton.

Always keep in mind these are principles, not laws, so there is room for variation (which we will talk about). And you should end up with the story you want to write—which is why there will be developmental assignments nearly every step of the way.

Of course, though, simply having a rib cage, backbone, and skull isn’t usually enough—you need to organize them into a coherent structure. They need to be arranged into their proper places, so they look “human” to other humans (i.e. like a “story” to other humans).




This is where structure comes in.

After digging up the bones, we’ll structure them in a way that is familiar and understandable to the audience.

We will structure not only the plot, but the character cast and theme as well. We will cover basic story structure, scene structure, act structure, and narrative arc beats.

Near the end of the course, we will workshop one of your scenes in class. And your final assignment will be to turn in a guided outline of your story for feedback.

Ideally, once the bones are strong and in place, your story will be—more or less—writing itself.

Not only can The Triarchy Method help you with your current story, but it can help you with all future stories.

I’ll give you the tools, you bring the dream—roll up your sleeves for some digging, because together we’re gonna make your story bone-solid.



What the Triarchy Method Course Will Help With


This is a content-focused course that will teach you how to develop great stories. This is a course focused on what the story is. It will help you . . .


Brainstorm better material that will be relevant to your story

Evaluate which content best suits and contributes to your book (and which belongs in another book)

Prevent you from writing hundreds of pages that take your story clear off the rails (before ending up in the recycling bin)

Write empathetic, compelling, and complex protagonists who exercise their agency

Develop a plot that keeps readers turning pages

Craft a meaningful theme that readers will be thinking about for weeks, months (or maybe even years) to come (without being preachy)

Stop writing and rewriting the same scenes to only have the story be marginally better

Create supporting characters who stay relevant and meaningful to the story (and don’t take over the story)

Fix plots that de-escalate or go nowhere, while strengthening antagonists

Figure out “what happens next” more easily

Craft scenes that will always move the story forward (no saggy middles here)

Structure your content in a coherent way for your audience

 

Class Size, Schedule, and Assignments

This is a live, online course that will be limited to 10 students.

Classes start January 9th, 2024, and will be held Tuesdays and Thursdays at 5pm Mountain Time, with our last class being March 28th. Every lesson will be recorded--so if you miss a class, you can watch it later (or however many times you want in the coming years).

There will be a total of 23 classes (No class February 15th). The classes will be about 75 minutes in length (some will be a few minutes longer and some a few minutes shorter; none will go over 90 minutes). This course will give you nearly thirty hours of class time that is almost entirely focused on creating strong story content.

You will receive a developmental assignment with nearly every lesson. These are typically sets of questions to help you brainstorm, craft, and/or revise the content of your story. Your responses to most questions will be, at most, a few paragraphs. You will receive feedback from me (September C. Fawkes) on these assignments.

Near the end of the course, you will have a scene workshopped in class. (You will also be expected to read other classmates’ scenes prior to their workshop day.) Your final assignment will be to turn in a guided outline of your book for feedback. You will receive that feedback in the weeks that follow the course’s conclusion.

If you desire, you can be added to a brainstorming/writing group or partnership to meet with outside of class.

This course is offered in partnership with MyStoryDoctor.com, and is $1,597 to take. (If you want to split that up into multiple payments, email service@mystorydoctor.com)


***Register for the Triarchy Method Here***



Testimonials


“I have done many courses . . . and I found this course going well beyond most of the others. September has a clear teaching style, and she gave a huge amount of time and effort helping us to work through any issues, and the weekly assignments are fantastic. I appreciated this so much as often writing courses are simply ‘set and forget’ videos with little or no feedback. The Triarchy of Story was nothing like that." 

- Sharon M.



"I was hesitant with the cost, but it was worth every cent. Every class brought new epiphanies for me. September is a brilliant teacher and the Triarchy Method is an essential course for anyone wanting a better understanding of story. She will take you on a journey through character, plot and theme that will deepen your understanding of the bones of your story, the three-act structure, and the trajectory of different plotlines across different arcs. 

"September's feedback is fantastic—she has a real talent for pointing out areas you could strengthen while celebrating the parts you've done well that leaves you feeling inspired to get back to your writing. 

"I finished September's course with notes I will refer back to again and again, a really thorough understanding of story mechanics, and an outline for my novel that makes sense of what started as a chaotic jumble of characters, ideas and plotlines. September has been supportive, encouraging and inspiring.

"I have come away with a much deeper understanding of story that I know will continue to deepen with time.

"I cannot recommend this course enough."

- Kelly W.



“September has a way of delivering material that makes it easy to understand. She is patient and accessible, a real joy to work with and learn from. If you have a chance to take one of her courses, jump on it!”

- Louisa S.



“Before this class, I felt I was lacking in my story and character development knowledge. Now, I can't wait to use what I learned to make my book more professional. I feel like I have the knowledge I need to call myself an author—an eye-opening experience.”

- Jason F.



“The Triarchy Method course, led by the amazing September C. Fawkes, offered an enriching experience in mastering character, theme, and plot. Her wide-ranging examples and hands-on worksheets helped with understanding, while the individualized scene workshop sessions provided a platform for application and growth. September's timely, insightful feedback on assignments helped me in my growth as a novice writer to refine my writing skills.”

- Dionne R.


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